1. Hitting That Tablet Sweet Spot: The Atavist

    The idea is a such a simple one that it’s no wonder that everyone who has tried it before has made a hash of it: create a ideal format for mid-length storytelling that recalls the better long form magazine journalism while making use of the possibilities of the multimedia age. Much like it took over a decade for people who actually TALK on their cellphones in public to be treated like the social lepers that they are, with the tablet and mid-length writing (more than an article, less than a book) the technology has preceded its appropriate patterns of usage.

    Enter The Atavist. 15,000 words, give or take. $2 a pop. The writer gets paid a flat fee plus a percentage (likely less than Apple’s 30% cut… ouch!) Stories launch simultaneously for the iPad, iPhone, Kindle, Nook, and soon, Android tablets (“We are working very hard on it, we promise…” says Atavist’s tech page.)

    The writers of the Atavist’s debut offerings–Wired regulars Brendan Koerner and Evan Ratliff–were kind enough to give me a demo on their iPads. “This one’s a loaner,” Koerner admits, dropping a non sequitur about the difference between his and Will Smith’s lifestyle.

    The debut stories are a joy to read. The format definitely encourages linear reading but doesn’t prohibit the sort of skimming and jumping around that internet-trained brains are prone to do. A button offers intuitive chapter selection, another shows or hides footnotes with audio, text, maps and timelines. The timeline features the clever option of hiding any spoilers by shrouding later events when accessed from early pages.

    So what’s the biggest change for the writers in crafting a story for this format? “The notes,” Koerner asserts. “In a book, you assume no one will read them. When they’re in-line, everybody will.” Because of the size, as compared to a full-length book, “I tried to keep things zooming along,” sometimes giving short-shrift to details of the setting–World War II-era India–that the average reader might not have the best acquaintance with. While an in-depth exploration of the Bengal famine or the nitty gritty of U.S. and British troop deployment policies wouldn’t work in something designed as a mid-size read, having inline notes available for background keeps readers on the same page while keeping the main narrative moving along.

    To best exploit this new form, Koerner’s plotting approach also changed. Koerner compares it to his recent experience adapting Now the Hell Will Start, his book about the jungle manhunt for soldier Herman Perry, to a script. Having archival photographs and scans of original sources not only integrated as inline elements but given pages of their own required a more visual approach to plan out the piece’s flow. “Kind of like a storyboard with text.” Because of the format, “I tried to keep it as visual as possible‚ us[ing] photos to create the atmosphere of that era.”

    Having such an expanded set of channels with which to tell a story gives the authors expanded options but also another hazard: reader overload. “You don’t want to overload the reader with links,” Ratliff says. With such intricate stories as a helicopter assisted multimillion-dollar heist in Sweden and the life and times of Asia’s preeminent WWII-era jazzman, there could be novels worth of footnotes luring the reader off into the weeds. It’s a process of managing the reader’s trust in the author, keeping them assured that what makes it into the main text and what makes it into the notes and media sections are specifically selected to create a cohesive story.

    The back end of the Atavist is a content management system built by Creative Director Jefferson Rabb. Ratliff showed off the control panel, emphasizing its versatility and basic writer-friendliness. “[Rabb] built the CMS to make it as easy as writing a blog post,” Ratliff says, adding that the interface would be manageable for anyone who had ever used something like WordPress, but with presets and options fit specifically to a certain Atavist style.

    That’s what’s striking about this debut: a feeling that a lot of thought went into what works and what doesn’t work in mid-length storytelling on a tablet. Where will people be reading these stories? What size chapters best meet a tablet reader’s attention span? What sort of options will build and support the narrative without distracting? From there, the Atavist team crafted a very compelling user experience.

    Case in point: both stories not only come with an audio version, but the reader can switch between audio and reading seamlessly, picking up with either right at the point in the story where they left off. Think of reading on a subway or bus as it fills up or taking your reading from the breakfast table to the car. It’s little details like this that signal that the minds behind this app understand where their user experience fits into the real world.

    The Atavist app and three chapter previews of Koerner and Ratliff’s stories, complete with extras, are available for free on the iTunes App store. Note that getting the full-length of each requires an in-app purchase, a tricky proposition for those of us who jailbreak their iOS devices. The stories are also available, in somewhat more limited form, as Kindle or Nook singles.


  2. Serendipity Generates Your Fantasies

    “The hale enchantress poses ‘pon husky columns, her placid covering violet of tincture… crimson oculars flashing with innocence and auditories pricked atop her powerful physique.”

    You think I could have written that?  Ha, fat chance.  No poet of magic-dealing furry slash fiction am I.  In fact, I don’t even know what that last sentence means.

    Posing dashingly on the ruined sludge fields of the internet, Serendipity’s text generators kick holes in your writer’s block with multiple genres of automatic gibberish.  Need a fantasy story plot?  How about: “In this story, witches and merfolk clash with a retired elf stuck in the middle.”  Bam! It’s the next Harry Potter I tell ya.

    Or say you find yourself working a dead-end job as M. Night Shamalon’s assistant and he wants three plot twists by 5 pm.  No problem:

    At this juncture a hungover police officer arrives and serves dinner.
    Suddenly a mysterious boy requests a lift from your protagonist’s mother.
    Suddenly a zookeeper arrives and throws a tantrum.

    And yes, like I said, you can use whatever comes spewing out of this internet idea hole.  As proprietor Mr Manon says:

    Yes, you may use the output of these generators to create your fiction, RPG, etc. That’s what they’re for. If you want to give me credit with a note and/or link, that’s very nice of you and is appreciated, but it’s not required. (N.B.: If the fiction, RPG, etc. in question is based on someone else’s fictional works, the accompanying copyright issues are your own lookout.)

    There’s only so many times your readers will accept a character named Lorem Ipsum. Spend no more time wracking your brains over medieval names, villianesses, online handles and descriptions of magicians.  It’s all ready made at the click of a link at Serendipity.


  3. Interview with Brendan Koerner, Microkhan

    Brendan Koerner writes the delightfully eclectic blog Microkhan, covering the latest developments in imaginary comic books, excessive ceremonies and the great sport of kabaddi. This outlet stays updated daily, somehow worked around his writing for Wired, Mother Jones and elsewhere. Among other hats he wears, he’s been Slate’s Explainer and is currently Wired’s Mr. Know-It-All. He wrote a gripping, painstakingly researched book about the World War II-era manhunt for Herman Perry in the jungles of South Asia, not to mention the script for its film adaptation. So why blog?

    “95% of my ideas suck,” he tells me. “The blog is for trolling through idea after idea, trying to find something that connects.” Ideas include the economics of collecting snake venom, the lesser known Choctaw code talkers and the unconventional recruitment techniques of the North Korean film industry. Sure, a little obscure but with a blog “there’s no penalty for doing it. For a magazine, the stakes are high. If I write a shitty blog post… it doesn’t matter.” At Microkhan, no topic is too obscure, providing what is both direct outlet and creative release valve for the stories and scraps that might not survive the harsher climate of national-level, ad-supported magazine writing.

    Brendan was kind enough to take time out from his breakneck pace of storycraft and parenting to have a few beers with me at the highly recommended Pony Bar in Hell’s Kitchen, Manhattan. A bar on the corner of a block that holds a active horse barn, a direct sales dry ice outlet and a plumber’s office with a 20 foot long Albert Einstein quote seemed appropriate to meet a fellow chronicler of the unusual and talk shop.

    “I need a very set routine,” he says. “When I’m in writing mode, I have my ritual. I write in the Columbia library and I walk the same route there, listening to the same music… I work in one library in the morning and another in the afternoon. I can’t be too isolated when I write. I need some level of distraction to keep me focused. I don’t socialize when I write but I observe.” And no headphones when he’s writing. “Some people can write with music but… that doesn’t work for me. I think writing is, itself, musical.”

    And by writing, he means non-fiction. “I love the challenge of doing [non-fiction] in different ways.” Thus far, that’d be magazines, books, blogs and film adaptation. Regardless of format, Brendan emphasizes that the point and the reward are still the same. “It’s all informed by this notion of communicating with the reader and these days, you’ve got to have your finger in a lot of pies to make that work… It’s all jacking into the hive mind, finding something useful in the scraps of facts and data and making it your own.”

    The border between blog-oriented creative mulch and paid writing is by no means watertight. The manhunt, trial and execution of Herman Perry that is the center of Now the Hell Will Start evolved from a stray note jotted down while researching a 2003 Slate column, languishing in the junk file for a couple years before the story’s inherent mystery prompted a deeper investigation.

    What’s more, Brendan’s recent Wired piece on the stem rust blight that’s presently threatening global wheat production evolved out of a post on Microkhan. “Wired has been a godsend, just incredible. I pitch them something like ‘Here’s a story about a fungus.’ and they actually tell me ‘Go do it.’”

    Rather than a distraction, Microkhan adds routine and form to the writing life, keeping the momentum going. “It enforces a discipline. I know that in the morning, I have to post. That’s really good for me.” While it might seem that cranking out an average of three, well-developed and link-laden posts a day on everything under the sun would be a job itself, Brendan uses it to structure the time he lets his mind wander. “I’m a believer int he idea that work expands to fill the time allotted. Blogging helps define the boundaries [of that work].”

    In case you’re wondering, Brendan’s junk file is the trusty old app notepad.exe. Sometimes simple just works.

    True to form, I left our meeting with a plethora of random tips and things to check out scribbled in my notebook. Here’s the best of it:
    - When traveling somewhere less than developed and you need a fixer, “find out what a doctor makes in that area and pay them that. That’s the rule of thumb.”
    - Brendan recommends the Detroit sounds of Second Wave Ghetto Tech; check out DJ Assault, Tasha T and Juicy Titties (no link, nearly un-google-able).
    - Some inspiring non-fiction: Eating Glass by Alfred Lawrie, a profile of a man who lives to collect world records, and The Lives of Brian Cathcart by Brian Cathcart, a tale of two lives with the same name, similar starts and very different endings.


  4. The Write Channel

    Giant leaf fell on a boy. Mayor ate too much and got sick. Kid bites dog. Grammar gets mangled.

    The Write Channel chronicled the not-so-gonzo journalism career of insect reporter R.B. Bug, spitting out the facts on a 70s local newscast under the watchful eye of editor/anchor Red Green.  No, not that Red Green.

    R.B. covered surreal events around town in a basic, straight-laced manner, suitable for illiterates and the E.S.L. classroom.  That’d be where I encountered this fine bit of educational programming.  Though I was already sawing my way through Isaac Asimov, in 4th grade they sat our narrow asses down in rows to watch our weekly installment of a stop-motion bug talking with all the speed and juicy detail of a Midwesterner with a concussion. (Yeah I went there, Minneapolis.)

    Still, credit is due for the end bit (the ominously named The Club) that goads viewers to fiction, finishing the epic tale of the Man Who Lost His Sack.  Interactive fiction with 1978 broadcast technology.

    After the cut, another clip where Red Green gets personal…

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  5. For Writers/Obsessives: Names and Weather

    In the realm of fiction, the concept of ‘plausibility’ is a tricky little bastard.  Unless you’re writing about dimensionless plasma dragons beyond all mortal physics and continuity, it’s going to be a sticky wicket to lie just right so that your reader swallows it while still being swept away in the unique fantasy world you’ve crafted.

    Even real life often comes off unlikely on the page.  Who among us young, shiftless, creative types has not tried to shoehorn into a plot some personally lived-through story that began with neutral spirits and come away muttering “Naw…. bullshit”?

    As I said, a sticky wicket.  I’ll say it again if pressed.

    Point being, it’s important to give some air of real life to your stories by recreating the milieu they take place in.  Character and setting greatly factor into this.  A couple of resources for this I came across tonight:

    Weather History: The Weather Underground kindly provides historical weather information.  Punch in city, state (or zipcode or airport code) and the date you’re looking for and they’ve got what the weather was like clear back to the 1940s.  This is clutch for scenarios which integrate historical events.  Never again begin your lone gunman love story in Dealy Plaza with “It was a dark and stormy night…”

    Popular Names Since 1879: Sure, everyone is named Jaden or Braden or UltraPeanut these days but naming an old guy ‘Tyler’ is going to fall flat and drag your story down with it.  Look up the top 200 from the approximate date of birth of your characters and pull from there.  It all feels less stalkery than combing through friends’ Facebook friends.

    Both resources are fairly U.S.-centric but, well, tough luck, Nigel.  Post what you use that delivers more Basils and rainfall over Slough in the comments.